I agree with every word. Tutor says to revisit picture about vertical&horizontal lines to notice how vetical lines convert in diagonal. He's right but I didn't have any other picture to reflect horizontal&vertical lines. Anyway as soon as I get it, I'm going to replace it.
I found the Assigment a little bit hard to complete and I think this is because I chose flowers and plants as subject. They never appealed me too much and I wanted to try a new "world" for me because I think trying new things is the best way to learn. So I agree that I was not able to capture the essence of the subject as well as anyone who has some experience on it.
Tutor advises me not to be so literal with the subject and I think it's one of my biggest handicap because I tend to be like that. I tend to be very explicit and descriptive myself and I think this is reflected in my photography as tutor guessed. So I'll try to give my pictures a new point of view.